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PTE写作每日一练:大作文高频真题训练

2017-08-02 15:15
摘要:  为了帮助大家能够更有效的提升PTE写作成绩,100留学准备了PTE写作每日一练题目,帮助大家熟悉写作题型,希望能够帮助到您。

  为了帮助大家能够更有效的提升PTE写作成绩,100留学准备了PTE写作每日一练题目,帮助大家熟悉写作题型,希望能够帮助到您。

PTE考试的时候,拿着大作文却无从下手?上一次给大家讲解了PTE考试大作文高频考题解题技巧,现在用一道PTE高频真题来看看该怎么做!

  (1)PTE真题

  Some employers involve their workers indecision making of products and services. What are the advantages anddisadvantages of this action.

  大家再来看下一道题:

  Company’s top-level authorities shouldget their employees in decision-making process. Discuss.

  这两道题是不是很相近呢?那么我们只要准备一次不就一石二鸟了么?

小贴士:在准备写作的时候,可以像这样把相同的问题归类合并,这样就能取得事半功倍的效果了!

  (2)文章大纲

  是不是一头雾水?感觉自己很方?给大家整理一下文章的思路吧!

开头段:Every coin has two sides and both the prosand cons will be discussed in this essay.

  让步:缺点

  Topicsentence: Empowerment will increase arrogance and it is also time-consuming

  Supporting sentence: fromgathering the latest news to entertaining us after tedious work, fromconnecting families and friends in faraway continents to educating us throughdistant learning;

  过渡句:

  However,the merits brought by empowerment is also not ignorable.

  主题:优点1

  Topic sentence: first-hands/hands-onexperience on the company’s offering;

  Supporting sentence: enables themto view some problems from other angles/perspectives and give more practicaland viable solutions.

  优点2

  Topic sentence: thispractice may break the leader-follower mindset with trust an的communication

  Supporting sentence:improve morale, increase/boost motivation and enthusiasm for the positionthrough autonomy of tasks, feel ownership about their goals, more self-disciplinedand intrinsic rewards, sense of responsibility

  Example: recentresearch, lower turnover/higher retention rate

  (3)范文

开头段:Empowerment is undoubtedly a process to engagelower-level employees in decision making processes regarding products andservices. However, there is another opinion claiming that the practice of empowermentis detrimental to the efficiency and productivity of the business concerned. Asfar as I am concerned, every coin has two sides and both the pros and cons willbe discussed in this essay.

点评:可以替换主题的词汇empowerment(授权)

  表达好处和坏处的词汇:merits(好处),drawbacks/shortcomings(坏处),detrimental (对。。。有害)

  开篇就告诉读者两个方面都会阐述:Both the pros and cons will be discussed in this essay.

主体段:Admittedly, empowerment will increasearrogance and it is also time-consuming. As aconsequence, it risks to be counterproductive for the topmanagement to make a decision, delay decision making process and miss someprecious time for marketing campaign.

  However, the merits brought by empowerment isalso not ignorable. Firstly, front-linestaffs should be encouraged to participate in the decision making processbecause of their first-hands/hands-on experience on the company’s offerings,which enables them to view some problems from other angles/perspectives andgive more practical and viable solutions.Besides, it is worthy to note that hands-onexperience processed by staffs are usually not possessed by top management. Secondly,this practice may break the leader-follower mindset with trust andcommunication which authorize workers to think, behave and make decisions andtake actions autonomously through the sharing of power, information andrewards. As a result, it will improve morale,increase/boost motivation and enthusiasm for the position through autonomyof tasks, feel ownership about their goals, more self-disciplinedand intrinsic rewards, sense of responsibility. Accordingto a recent research, this practice has been confirmed to attract lowerturnover/higher retention rate, higher employee satisfaction and reduced employeestress.

点评:主体段常用的连接词

  表让步:Admittedly

  表转折:However

  表观点展开顺序:Firstly,Secondly

  举例子:Accordingto a recent research

总结段:

In conclusion, There is no doubt thatempowerment serves as an importanttool for senior managers to make full use of the human potentials. Therefore, managers should balanceall the possibilities given theabovementioned points.

点评:总结中可增加对反对观点的强调,用上There is no doubt that 商业类文章万用总结:balance all the possibilities (多方面考虑平衡各项因素)

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